I'm getting closer to revealing the project I've been working on for the past month with TF Photography. I need opinions. Which one do you like best?
authentic life. captured.
your authentic life. captured.
authentic. life. captured.
birthday boyS! {40 and 8}
15 years ago
7 comments:
First one. Let the verb go solo for more impact, and don't define the parameters of authetic...leads to imaginative possibilities for the reader. Can't wait to see the big unveil! :)
Brittany
everybody in my office likes the first one.
I agree about the first one. I also thought of:
"Capturing authentic life." or "Real moments, real people. Captured."
Just thoughts -- I think what you have is great!
Kate Bedinghaus
I agree with Brittany but am also acknowledging that the "your" in the second one creates a relationship between you and the client.
Can't wait.
T
First one.
Kristina
agreed. first one.
becky
I like them all, but the last one is actually my favorite ... closely followed by the first. :) I love your Valentine's Day pictures, by the way!
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